• t3h_fool@lemmy.world
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      1 year ago

      “They indicted 7 people for Terrorism last year, in part because they encrypted their disks, used tail as their OS and signal for communication.” would work maybe.

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          1 year ago

          It’s my native language and I have no idea what they’re getting at either.

          Don’t worry…

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        1 year ago

        That just makes it harder to read :( I think the original sentence is grammatically fine.

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          1 year ago

          More words make read harder, that’s right. But you can’t use fewer words if the meaning changes because of that.